Tribulation

depths....the plains of intellilect
and impact
of a touch
a word
a want

reading your works
and rolling through my madness
sortting what must be and what has
occured

the surreal moments
removed

mimicking the colliery’s faithful -this line is a tongue twister

chasing dew-chasing is a bit cute,

ignorant-doesn't tell us anything..ignorant light? means what?

rents space between the robins call-like this line

time
the once wondrous gift-bit cliched

I trace your name upon my face-good ending, I would make this the beginning as well simply for the sonics.
as usual a poem worth reading,