Chocolate Men

Men are like chocolates
some to soft, some to hard
some sweet and tasty
some dark and nasty
I’ve tried a few in my time
on some I wouldn’t spend a dime
I like the ones that melt in my mouth not in my hand
add a few nuts, yummm, that’s grand
men are like chocolates
some flavoursome, some not

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ireland, IRL

Comments

Line 2

too soft , too hard?

thanks x

Hi Sue

Are you saying a hard man is good to find?...................stan

yes definitely lol x

Very nice

Do you need those too's in line 2
Some soft some hard

your right must get rid of

your right must get rid of the too's or the somes thanks a mil x

too hard ...too soft

chocolates just melt in the mouth
the tongue has to be sweet ...
it must have the force to slice
men's chocolates are hard too
if solid men have been seen by you..

Hi loved another poem in

Hi loved another poem in response they melt in the mouth not in the hand lol x thanks have a great day

GLAD for u they

dooooooooooooo

xx

Yummy nothing like chocolate

Yummy nothing like chocolate and a hard man hmmmmm

I've nothing to add to this flavoursome mix

Hugs Jc x