life

As the stars we stretch to eternity, only man want's to limit things purely by his own limitations of physical Life.
As you are aware there is more than a physical being that only lasts a few years.
Lovely write, Yours, Ian.T

You know me and the KISS principle lol. I think a simpler word than quiescent would fit better. Something like still or calm. And last line....maybe beyond rather than out of. Just a few ideas from a rank beginner........stan

done life it's justice dear Judy

I especially loved

a panorama
aglow

and that last line,,so true!

intelligent and eloquent.

I've complained of lack of passion and verve in your work but these deep, spiritual, mindful works are, i my opinion, your best.

is in itself an intelligence gaining treat
hope some day to composing poetry
you shall me treat

of my version about life
some other day!

I can see this so clearly, though in mine, it is taking place at a crimson red sunset. Somehow I feel I know you more now.

Great Job Judy!

Ron