poorer without you
the founder member of Neo
and
I assure myself
no one will ever take your place ever
you are the best critique by far....
the only one
who sees the nuances
but damn cares who the poet may be ....
over decades now i have been swimming
in shallow streams
to be elevated as a poet
I always dream
some day perhaps
someone will lay a wreath
and say
here lies a poet under rose’s reef
Jul 21, 2012
the world will be
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
a nice dedication loved
well expressed... i have no changes to offer
love judy xxx
How sweet of you
Judy
you know i am thinking of introducing this stuff in my next poem
nice=5 marks
good =8 or 9 plus
awesome =10
wow ====wow... wow.. vow
u will never compose... the last one
add on....
next poem.............................
vhattttttt hab =zyu to shay????!!!!>>>>