loved
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Jul 21, 2012

the world will be

poorer without you
the founder member of Neo
and
I assure myself
no one will ever take your place ever
you are the best critique by far....
the only one
who sees the nuances
but damn cares who the poet may be ....
over decades now i have been swimming
in shallow streams
to be elevated as a poet
I always dream
some day perhaps
someone will lay a wreath
and say
here lies a poet under rose’s reef

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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loved

Judy
you know i am thinking of introducing this stuff in my next poem

nice=5 marks

good =8 or 9 plus

awesome =10

wow ====wow... wow.. vow
u will never compose... the last one
add on....

next poem.............................
vhattttttt hab =zyu to shay????!!!!>>>>