CRUCIFIXIONS--updated

I think you should either add to this poem or leave a footnote as to what you were trying to portray here. "I am more than dying" a little twist in the tail there. I like it but I'm greedy I want more brother.

John

just awesome - yes, we are more than what we leave behind here.
'wallow in my own salvation... am more than my dying' - what great word usage throughout this write
this i think is one of the best i've seen from you
love judy
xxxx

I’m sinking down into myself:-
In there you will find a beautiful Spirit that is you

And wallow in my own salvation,:-
Your strict beliefs will eventually take you where you have to go

I am not pain.:-
Pain or lack of pain can torment even the strongest of Spirits.

Not decay. Not loss:-
That you are whole and not sick yet leaving is harder to bear than an illness this needs more strength..

I am more than my dying:-
Joe you are much more than your dying, the accumulation of all you have given in your days here will shine brighter than a new star..

You are in our thoughts always, Yours Ian.T , Anne and Friends

'salvation' to 'crucifixion' = you could make the title 'crucifixion' and keep 'salvation' in the poem....
:(
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