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By lou, 29 November, 2010
lou

lou

14 years 5 months ago

There has been some confusion over what the Newsletter Contest Rules are, so here they are.

1) The poem must include the whole sentence as provided or all of the words in any order.

2) The poem can be any length and any style.

3) Do not post the poem on Neopoet before entry ( as the whole point is for members to read the winning poem in the newsletter)

4) Email your entry to louise.mcwhorter@neopoet.com

There will be a contest each month , the above rules apply.

Lou

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 4 months ago

Lou,

it is a shame that you won't be able to enter into this competition...since you're the judge, juror & executioner!

So here is a challenge for you. You write one using the same words from the competition and I'll do the same.

Then I will decide whose is best!! Lol!

Post it here and maybe others will tell us how good mine is and how poor yours is!!

Do you accept the challenge?

HS

lou

lou

14 years 4 months ago

In reply to by Hooded Stranger

Your on, may the best man (woman) win. LOL

Lou

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 4 months ago

Lou,

rules say (I have just made them up) that the winner gets a bar of chocolate!

Deadline for the challenge is close of play Saturday evening, preferably before the X-Factor!! Lol!

I hope yours is gonna be good, because my draft is already looking like a winner.

I prefer WholeNut Chocolate by the way!!

Lol!

HS

lou

lou

14 years 4 months ago

In reply to by Hooded Stranger

Dan,

My poem is looking good also, when I win can you send me something fruit based, as I can't eat chocolate, as i'm on a diet. LOL !!

Lou

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 4 months ago

Lou,

read it and weep!

Facsimile

Facsimile of the human psyche unravelled
Reveals a paper trail of the life I've travelled
Incriminating evidence of my vital force now found
Like the endless paper on the fax, I fall without sound

Attacked, by the fax
Back-tracked into the crack
Trapped by the facts
Slapped by the unseen smack

Facsimile of the virtual spirit is revealed
Unravels a path of the life I thought concealed
Accusing proof of my stained and broken soul
Like the paper in the bin, I fail the quality control

© 2010 Unsqueezed Productions

lou

lou

14 years 4 months ago

Hehe ,

very good, but POW !! take that, ( and i don't mean the boy band) LOL

Finger tips etching grooves into the earth’s crust,
I’m clinging , precariously,
Frantic struggling, against the abyss.

I’m an enigma,
Descending into ambiguity.
Clutching at sanity.

Mistrust of reality,
Crushed under its gravity.
Grinding me into dust.

Cataclysmic hush,
As my world, rolls in on itself.
Leaving a husk of my former self.

Be still, be quiet,
In a holding pattern.
Inertia creeping.

I’m ineffectual ,
Off the radar.
I’m in stasis.

Facsimile of the human psyche unravelled.

lou

lou

14 years 4 months ago

It's past the deadline, did i win LOL

lou

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 4 months ago

it seems that yours is best...by a long shot.

An apple is on its way in the post!

Lol!

HS

lou

I'll have a Cox's Orange Pippin please.

LOL

Lou

These are the rules for the newsletter contest, the winner of November's newsletter contest, will be published in the next issue.

The next contest and the rules will also featrure in the next issue.
1) The poem must include the whole sentence as provided or all of the words in any order.

2) The poem can be any length and any style.

3) Do not post the poem on Neopoet before entry ( as the whole point is for members to read the winning poem in the newsletter)

4) Email your entry to louise.mcwhorter@neopoet.com

5) Prize publication of poem in Newsletter

6) One entry per person .

There will be a contest each month , the above rules apply. Failure to comply will mean that you will bwe unable to enter.

Lou

"All opinion is valid as long as you truly believe it, so have the courage of your own convictions".

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