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A significant message within your haiku! You packed alot of meaning into few words and lines. I have no suggestions, only a deep appreciation for the work.

always, Cat

i love this, the less said the more room for thought...love it...thanks.

i just gained a lot more respect for you; i CANNOT write in haiku! so yay for you! i think it said just enough, nicely done.
always,
mag

MDT said it perfectly... so much thinking rushed in where you used those few words to open doors & sweep passages clear.... just wonderful... still whirling with it!

Anni xx

Don't write Haiku's, but the way this glides amongst the brain cells is perfect. Regards Roscoe..

This is so...so...isn't it ?
A fascinating evocative set of words
that says something in a new way so well judyanne

a gem.

annanya.x

nice haiku
filled with emotion
no commotion
no illusion

i usually can't stand these kind
of writes ...they often seem to be a single thought masquerading
as something poetic

however!
this write stopped me in my tracks

i read it, felt i'd just read some kind of profound truth. this write
impacted upon me, and for some strange reason, makes me think
of death
but not in any morbid, creepy way ... just makes me think
of the ultimate separation

terrific write
loved it

cheers
p

Just had a thought...

You don't know its whole
until it is gone.

annanya with love.