Sensuous orb warms my skin
causing a smile.
Peaceful and sanguine
Light lingers throughout the morning.
lunchtime arrives,
life remains pleasurable.
Flat grey clouds weave
thier way and intersperse,
between the puffy white.
In a late afternoon miasma .
Night fall swallows luminous day
the moon’s distant pale,
invades .
Comments
Shirl
Thank you very much.
Love Lou
Lou
I love the refers to the moon and sun in this
its truly well done
Eddie C.
This stanza made me keeping reading;
"Sensuous orb warms my skin
Causing a smile
Peaceful and sanguine"
Eddie
Thank you, much appreciated.
Lou
Ian
thank you, it was a lovely weekend it was mother's day and the whole family went out for dinner.
lou
Xena
Thank you, I always have a problem with which words are all one word LOL !!
love lou
Xena
thanks
lou
Dear Lou,
I like your title! The poem flows well and gives off good feelings all around. I like the same lines as Eddie C. Keep up the good work!
love, Cat
Thanks
Cat,
Thank you very much.
Love Lou
Pleasure to meet you
And it's thanks to my fascination with the word "miasma" at the moment that I stumbled upon this. I think one may call that serendipity, which I also have a fascination with.
But anyway, and without too many words. It's astonishing how perfectly someone else can describe your emotions about a day, or particular moments in them. You do so tranquilly, and with no heavy-weighted words to change the tone from anything other than elegant.
Thank you for this.
Yours
Waldo
Hi Waldo
It's a pleasure to meet you as well. I love to find new words to express myself with, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this poem.
Louise