Life Walked Through Us

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Thank you for sharing your poem "Life Walked Through Us". Your poem captures the essence of life's journey with its ups and downs. The contrast between the joyful moments and the moments of fear and sadness is well portrayed.

The use of imagery in the first stanza is particularly effective. The use of silvery, glorious, glittering, and golden to describe the times you shared with loved ones creates a vivid picture in the reader's mind. The repetition of "Forever to remember" emphasizes the importance of these moments and their lasting impact.

In the second stanza, the contrast between the joyful moments and the moments of fear and sadness is well portrayed. The use of "cruised" and "crawled in cowardice" creates a sense of movement and stagnation, respectively. The line "many peace, plenty pieces" is a bit unclear and could benefit from further elaboration.

The third stanza is a poignant tribute to a friend who has passed away. The use of "gently

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tells a story of people who had life in their relationship, and treated life as though it were a thing all of its own; which makes the poem about what happens when "life" moves on and leaves one behind. Life then becomes something of an entity; to be
thought of as a "friend". Well done! ~ Geezer.
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This is a great write. Sometimes we get left behind or the ones doing the leaving behind. Good job.