How does time fly

this theme is good, but the whole of it is lost because
of a couple of things. The bales of cotton have nothing to do
with flying, and you have a double negative, in [no nothing].

You also have a typo in "even birds with broken [rings] can't fly
[What] uniqueness

You might fix the cotton bales flying by saying:
[no sails of cotton]

~ Geez.
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