Take Me To the Otherside

Take me to the other side
where my brighter future
as you all now say lies

I have reached the zenith
which height that
none can relay

I take it as
MOUNT EVEREST
many reached the top
I can now only fly over it
just send a 'copter to me

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

We get to that other side soon enough. All say......none can say ? i think you need to work on these two lines a bit

any better
or
should I scrap it

NO!!! don't scrap it! I hope we both have a pleasant and easy landing after the thrill of soaring over the heights!

*love, Cat

O Cats