a knuckled skull
with no where to go
made of mud and blood
took a needle to sew
made her
during a blood moon
her parts for pleasure
some one to spoon
did it in shadows
so angels couldn't see
fashioned detritus
scraped a dead tree
gave her toes
and a small chin
played a samba
and shaped her thin
after i wove her
from spiritous mist
she called me god
i did insist
i wanted her sexy
incantations and scum
danced the who-la
resurrection did come
in barbarous tongue
enshrined truth on her head
she animated
and got out of bed
who am i
she begged to see
my lover always
i said with glee
what is love
she did inquire
its feelings of warmth
that do inspire
where are they, where is it
is it in this room
i have nothing in me
where does it loom
i pulled down my pants
she looked up with shock
oh my god she cried
what a beautiful cock
she came at me
unbridled and mad
grabbed me and broke me
and called me dad
she starved for a stuffing
and sucked like a pig
huffing and puffing
my dick got so big
we lived together
til i dropped dead
she lives forever
still waiting in bed
Comments
A funny take...
on the Golem. I wonder what the next person to visit that bedroom thought? Would she respond to them? The title is uhhhh... I wish you had said something like: "The Golem Sleeps" or Waits etc...
language was good and the theme too. Just the kind of thing that animates me. Lol. The ending is great, which prompted my questions. ~Geezer.
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Hi Geezer
DUNO ;)
Thanks for the read and comments Geezer
Z
Nice to see the rhyme
Makes the read very easy with a nice flow
I would drop “what is love “ and the few lines there. It trivializes for me the sexual tensions
thanks for the explanations!
Hello Eumolpus
Many thanks for the read and comment ,,,hmmmm on the line subtraction ,,,Will consider carefully ! :)