faerybeki
faerybeki
Jan 19, 2011

You are Here

I wrote songs for you
long
before we
met

their melodies
lingered
in the heart of me
echoing
through my everything
calling you
from Heaven

and
You came

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: GBR

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faerybeki

:))) love you too honey. This one came to me in the bath, fortunately it stuck around long enough to be written ;) so many poems run through my head and I'm unable to get them down (hands full with kids and nappies etc lol) but this one wanted to be remembered :) glad you like it :) and even glader it made you smile :) HUGS xxxx

K

Sweet!

Nice to see you Beki.

I have a thought for tweaking the ending which is the heart of the poem.

You are here. The title already suggests the ending.

Anyhow, welcome back and I look forward to reading your poems.

~A

faerybeki

Hi Anna, apologies for not responding sooner, very rude of me to post and run lol :) I quite like your suggestion but wonder if maybe I could alter the title and not the end? would still address that issue, hey ho, I'll give it some thought. Lovely to see you here :) oodles of love xxx

Z

ziggy

14 years 2 months ago

hi again , good to see you about
a nice sweet write, good title ,,zigs

faerybeki

Hey Zigs, good to see you too, would love to be around a bit more but time and life will not allow, at the moment anyway :) glad you approve of title, I changed it after seeing Anna's comment, much love Beki xxx

S

I always enjoy a poem of such simplicity and deep feeling. Very nice..........................scribbler

mand

mand

14 years 2 months ago

You have a natural talent. I agree with all the above. Short but packed with lovely emotions.

Well done

Love Mand xxxxxxx