I wrote songs for you
long
before we
met
their melodies
lingered
in the heart of me
echoing
through my everything
calling you
from Heaven
and
You came
I wrote songs for you
long
before we
met
their melodies
lingered
in the heart of me
echoing
through my everything
calling you
from Heaven
and
You came
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
:))) love you too honey. This
:))) love you too honey. This one came to me in the bath, fortunately it stuck around long enough to be written ;) so many poems run through my head and I'm unable to get them down (hands full with kids and nappies etc lol) but this one wanted to be remembered :) glad you like it :) and even glader it made you smile :) HUGS xxxx
Thank you Shirl :) glad you
Thank you Shirl :) glad you like it. It makes my day to have made two lovely ladys smile :) much love Beki xxx
Sweet!
Sweet!
Nice to see you Beki.
I have a thought for tweaking the ending which is the heart of the poem.
You are here. The title already suggests the ending.
Anyhow, welcome back and I look forward to reading your poems.
~A
Hi Anna, apologies for not
Hi Anna, apologies for not responding sooner, very rude of me to post and run lol :) I quite like your suggestion but wonder if maybe I could alter the title and not the end? would still address that issue, hey ho, I'll give it some thought. Lovely to see you here :) oodles of love xxx
Very nice! Glad I read this
Very nice! Glad I read this one.
Victor
Ta Victor :) glad you're glad
Ta Victor :) glad you're glad :) and you enjoyed the poem, much love Beki xxx
Thank you Lonnie :) I guess
Thank you Lonnie :) I guess that's what all us poets aspire to eh? so happy you found some inspiration here, much love Beki xxx
hi again
hi again , good to see you about
a nice sweet write, good title ,,zigs
Hey Zigs, good to see you too
Hey Zigs, good to see you too, would love to be around a bit more but time and life will not allow, at the moment anyway :) glad you approve of title, I changed it after seeing Anna's comment, much love Beki xxx
Welcome back . and the tweak
Welcome back . and the tweak you thought of works, beautifully.
~A
:) the tweak I thought of?! ;
:) the tweak I thought of?! ;) lol glad it worked as the title, I really didn't want to change the last line :) but could totally see what you meant in your comment, thanks Anna xxx
nope, I was bassackwards. ;-
nope, I was bassackwards. ;-)
~A
greetings
I always enjoy a poem of such simplicity and deep feeling. Very nice..........................scribbler
Greetings back :) happy you
Greetings back :) happy you felt it scribbler, much love Beki xxx
Hello Faerybeki
You have a natural talent. I agree with all the above. Short but packed with lovely emotions.
Well done
Love Mand xxxxxxx
Thank you Mand :) glad you
Thank you Mand :) glad you enjoyed it, much love Beki xxx