Sunku ( The Dance)

that you have the form right; except that you have the lines in the wrong order. I really like the hint of vampirism included. A new member of the Darkside?
~ Geezer.
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Yes...Geezer is right...in the context of Sunku lines of your stanzas are upside down and need to be turned 180 degrees

The mountain upside down! I quite like it in this form, although I know it's not strictly the form, I sense the bite. I'll have a look at this workshop, thank you.

Cheers,

Chris.

Sounds like an important evening you are having there. Anti-sunku looks good.