It's time to flow,
the time of fall.
a period to past prime,
when deciduous loses their
green pages.
the annual of receding,
a season to decline.
An hour of wave has arrived,
when greenery depreciates.
as yeender breath ice,
the night smoke dust.
the trees look worried,
for their naked moment is here.
A fig is looking nude,
it's figure seems budding.
the flower savored,
perhaps is refreshment.
the leaves speak dried,
from green to brown fly high.
The frugivores aves
sing joyfully,
but hides no more.
for the plight of tree has
gripped their beauty,
it swing away their pride shades.
the autumn is ross,
indeed n-a-t-u-r-a-l.
Comments
good one simon
goodluck to the contest
THANKS
Thanks chiori,i really appreciate and goodluck too
hello
A lot of good imagery here. A few errors in word use caused some trips. Good luck in contest.....stan
thanks
i will work on it,thanks for your information sir.
YES
It's ok
Nice nature poem
Love the worried trees!
Also I did not know you had seasons as we do in the Northeast, I thought Nigeria was more tropical.
How cold does it get get there?
yes
here in Nigeria there are states that are as cold as ice,and some are not that cold.
Hi Simon
The only line that befuddles me is "the autumn is ross" What the heck is "ross". Otherwise a good description of autumn
ross
Is the rough, scaly surface on the bark of a tree.