Under an orange moon
everything
is perfect
Oct 04, 2016
Susan
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Under an orange moon
everything
is perfect
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
hello,
Susan must be someone very special to you, to dedicate such lovely thoughts to her! wonderful imagery here!
always, Cat
cool
cool
pleasant sentiment
(but hardly true)
love/infatuation can do this to an otherwise sane man
I like the immediacy and looseness of your approach to Haiku
hope there are more to come
respectfully,
We need more orange moons. Jx
We need more orange moons. Jx
Lovely image
Your sentiment comes through ever so clearly! I hope Susan appreciates this tribute to her! It's proof it only takes a few words to express ones feelings for for another!
val
One in all, all in one, if
One in all, all in one, if only this is realised, no worries
About. not being perfect
guy
perfect or not perfect
if everything were perfect there'd be no reason to strive for perfection; and yes maybe trite but true.... not to mention the fact that life would be boring as hell if all were perfect!
val