DIVINITY
I catch glimpses of shadows
from the corner of my eye,
unexpected intrusions, like ghosts,
fleeting quickly by.
I feel chills from deep inside,
a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...
a frightful presence divine
Comments
powerful Joe
Can I suggest a small change in preseentation
Imo it just might read more smoothly as
a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...
Love judy
xxx
done. thanks. joe
done. thanks.
joe