brittle light
brittle light
May 12, 2016

Skallywags

pandemonium and fisticuffs

t'was a flabbergasting, and
discombobulating brouhaha over
what the funniest word was!

pooh-poohing
such ridiculousness,
I guffawed at them all.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Geezer

Geezer

8 years 11 months ago

there was a dissemination of wordy statements brought to the arena.
Whereupon, there was vigorous dissention. Cool!
~Gee

weirdelf

ratbag
simple and full of meaning.

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