pandemonium and fisticuffs
t'was a flabbergasting, and
discombobulating brouhaha over
what the funniest word was!
pooh-poohing
such ridiculousness,
I guffawed at them all.
pandemonium and fisticuffs
t'was a flabbergasting, and
discombobulating brouhaha over
what the funniest word was!
pooh-poohing
such ridiculousness,
I guffawed at them all.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sounds like...
there was a dissemination of wordy statements brought to the arena.
Whereupon, there was vigorous dissention. Cool!
~Gee
thanks G,
thanks G,
the funniest word?
It is worth thinking on, when drunk.
discombobulation ranks
I like
ratbag
simple and full of meaning.
ratbagy blues would be the
ratbagy blues would be the funniest song.
I was only interested in the aural aspect of words for this piece (obviously subjective)
regards,
Fascinating
concept and imaginative execution. I enjoyed very much.
Keith
I value your critiques. You seem to 'get' it all; the gestalt, form and function, logic, etc; things others don't touch on
I appreciate your takes and opinions.
lol - I so love this Al
It just rolls off the tongue
love guffawing myself
Enjoyed
Love judy
xxx