I reside in the cold hours of dawn
My pain of existence intensifies
Crystal clear clarity pierces right through me
This hate I feel for myself
Freezes in my veins
Hot tears stain my barren cheeks
And scar my imperfect soul
They say you have to love yourself before others can
But self-loathing is already a part of me
My hostility and sorrow make me who I am
So should I just wallow in the egotistical train of thought
and persist in my hurting?
Comments
Wow!!
loving yourself for who you are is the answer which you have done here. you are comfortable in the hurting, it is about you no one else. there is love in that, because you don't lie to yourself you recognize what you feel so you live it. when you get tired of it then and only then can you move on. no one can tell you when, that's the beauty of choice. Which is only yours.
I love the the reality of this write and the fact that the darkness is not darkness to you but a place to look into your own psychic.
wonderful, great!!
thanks for posting this beauty
E.C.
Thanks everyone, maybe I
Thanks everyone, maybe I should join Depressives not so Anonymous,( a little black Humour for ya ) lol
Seriously thank you.
hope you are ok xena
Love lou
JC
Thanks, i'm well known for my typos
love lou
hi
Thank you Ian.
There ia always someone worse off, who usually handles it better than you.
lou
awesome write lou
remember kurt cobain's comment
'thanks for the tragedy, it helps my art' (or something like that)
love and hugs
judy
Jude
Do you realise Kurt Cobain would be about 43 now,which is the same age as me?, I don't claim to have his talent though.
love lou
Hi Lou
I love the honesty of your poems.
Excellent poem my friend.
Love Mand xxxx
Mand
thank you
lou
Lou
Lou,
without doubt the best poem you've written to date. Perfectly self-loathing and the edit has tightened it up too.
Can't pick out any favourite lines - they all weave neatly into each other and flow wonderfully well.
Excellent poem!
HS
HS
HS,
Thank you I'm so pleased you liked it.
Lou