Kailashana2
May 04, 2015

If I could wrap my head around these things, I'd be a fly in a spider web

yup.
that's the whole poem.

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”.

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Rula

Rula

9 years 11 months ago

Nice to see you posting here again. It makes my heart good to see the older friends.
I thought there is a good thought and a subtext here, but also thought it would have been better if you gave a shorter title and extended your thought a little bit more to give us, the readers a space to enjoy. Anyway I know you when you revolutionize even over yourself.
best regards to you.

R

raj

9 years 11 months ago

would be nice if after a while you let us know the essence of this write by decoding the abstract...till then you have me guessing...