yup.
that's the whole poem.
May 04, 2015
If I could wrap my head around these things, I'd be a fly in a spider web
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
yup.
that's the whole poem.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Hello Anna
Nice to see you posting here again. It makes my heart good to see the older friends.
I thought there is a good thought and a subtext here, but also thought it would have been better if you gave a shorter title and extended your thought a little bit more to give us, the readers a space to enjoy. Anyway I know you when you revolutionize even over yourself.
best regards to you.
You are a fly in the spider's web of your own causes
I've lost count.
They are all good causes though.
Hi Rula, sometimes I turn
Hi Rula, sometimes I turn inside out, and my poems are askance.
Hi Jess. A woman's work is never done. lol.
True
Lysistrata was wrong. Lots of sex stops war.
how?
baby fighters along the way,
wrong! Murderer!
Babies live to continue the evolutionary line.
Always the artist...
Bravo my Dear!!!!!!!
bravo..
(mr Wolf)
the essence of you right
the essence of you right there in that one sentence
love xox
Hi Anna
would be nice if after a while you let us know the essence of this write by decoding the abstract...till then you have me guessing...