lovedly
lovedly
Mar 16, 2015

Sweet dreams..waffless

Sweet dreams

Sweet dreams are written in heaven
for those who are happily married

those still distraught
are in fallacious search caught

searching wild in the wilderness
all day all night

so let the wavering winds blow
and as we from here all go

late into the eerie night
day break bring violet light

let red roses spray fragrance too
of love and affection on all of you

like rainbows true
with a smiling hue

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

judyanne

Nice loved

But 'winds of change' --- too cliche
Can you think of a unique way to say it?
Love judy
xxx

S

Not all marriages bear sweet dreams lol. But I' damned lucky that mine has given me few night mares. Might try let the storms of pruning blow if you want to say that line differently.........stan

lovedly

Might try let the storms of pruning blow if you want to say that line differently.........stan??????

couldn't follow what and why why lie>?

lovedly

so let the winds of change blow
and as we from here all go

'''so let the winds race with speed
and with it slice away human greed...''
any better is it

late into the night etc....

Sparrow

I recently gave you a complete list of winds,
any of these will do,
but pick one that in your area doth blow..
So let the Zephyr of life flow.
Come on we wrote of many for you to choose lol,
Take care young Bard and don't get the Wind/Wind up just you do your own thing,
Yours Ian..

lovedly

i will let my wind flutter
as it does still
i won't my waffle kill
winds blow
we all know
gone be the wind
along with the bard
with in

lovedly

i will let my wind flutter
as it does still
i won't my waffle kill
winds blow
we all know
gone be the wind
along with the bard
with in

R

raj

10 years 1 month ago

good one...i suggest you keep the two line pattern through and through instead of 1 sanza which is of 3 verses...

choose an alternate to "fumes" because fumes conveys pollution rather than fragrance, scent, aroma...

A good read,

Regards,