a gypsy spirit
speaking Bohemian language
are the wild daisies
When the season is over
the phase is caged in a vase
a gypsy spirit
speaking Bohemian language
are the wild daisies
When the season is over
the phase is caged in a vase
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
Beautiful thanks for jumping in and bringing in the spring with us at eternal renga. Will you please go to your edit and put this in the "bring in the spring workshop". I'll have you in the participants box momentarily
I liked this Rula, especially
I liked this Rula, especially the Bohemian touch which made this unique...
Regards,
Thank you raj
For the encouraging words. Highly appreciate it.
Thank you Barbara
for adding me and the nice comment.
Much appreciate it dear.
Hope all is well with you.
I'm better
My MS in remission
This broken tooth has me miserable
Don't know if i will ever get it fixed
Don't have the money
Do thus I suffer until it move on
For another day
wonderful
coming Rula from you
kindly read mine too
not much a do to
not only all about spring to say
but Rula twill be nice coming my way
hello loved
And many thanks for the time and the nice words
Salam, Rula
Yes! I've been waiting for you to join the workshop, sis. Can't remember the last time you have written a tanka here.
Alid
Thank you
Khalid. I think this is my first or second one.
this is cool~!
excellent work!
dazzling sweet!
thank U Rula!
Hi
Have you written haiku or senyru lately
hello Barbara
are we supposed to write haiku and senyru or only tanka
Rula
Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.
Rula
Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.
thank you
Steve. So kind of you to give this one a visit.
Appreciate it
Glad to see you Steve
Welcome to eternal renga