Rula
Rula
Mar 24, 2016
This poem is part of the workshop:

Bring in the Spring Eternal Renga

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Spring (Tanka)

a gypsy spirit 
speaking Bohemian language 
are the wild daisies 

When the season is over 
the phase is caged in a vase

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Comments

Barbara Writes

Beautiful thanks for jumping in and bringing in the spring with us at eternal renga. Will you please go to your edit and put this in the "bring in the spring workshop". I'll have you in the participants box momentarily

Barbara Writes

My MS in remission
This broken tooth has me miserable
Don't know if i will ever get it fixed
Don't have the money
Do thus I suffer until it move on
For another day

lovedly

coming Rula from you
kindly read mine too
not much a do to

not only all about spring to say
but Rula twill be nice coming my way

alidzain

Yes! I've been waiting for you to join the workshop, sis. Can't remember the last time you have written a tanka here.

Alid