I think upon the water
Dreamt of in the night
It's preposterous, perfect
Ripples, linear and criss-crossing
Just so perfect
Just so right.
Feb 06, 2023
Night Tide (dream)
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A fragment...we'll see.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
In my mind's eye...
I see a darkened pool of water in an isolation chamber, with ripples and crisscross lines, the movement of it born of
inhalation and exhalation. I don't know why, I just do. A piece to make one think. If that is what it is for, it does the job. ~ Geezer.
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Isn't it wonderful?
The same poem can give the reader differing images. For me it was a lake. Rippling and moving moved with a gentle breeze, kissed in starlight.
I think this is a gorgeous short poem.
Cheers Seren
First stanza of a long
First stanza of a long running theme. Thanks for taking a look.
Cheers
Beautiful imagery
I see a night sky, water rippling underneath. The moonlight is beating down as one floats along, pondering life's wonders. Well done!
Thank you, means a lot. I've
Thank you, means a lot. I've been on this platform for quite some time. It's good to be back, and I will have a look at your work, for sure.
Cheers
Chris