I'm feeling frisky
Can we be a bit risky?
find some little alcove
and share our love
I've never been so brave
but you, right now, I crave
Is that a sound of condemnation?
No, cos here you are at my work station
You say "I need you to do some filing"
I outwardly moan but can't stop smiling
never has it felt so right
can't wait for more afternoon delight
Dec 11, 2012
Feeling Frisky
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Hi Sue
LOL This good, but I think lines 3 & 4 need a re-write. "alcove" is real hard to rhyme!
Nice one.
Hi Jim
Hi Jim
thanks for enjoying this little one but keeping in line with this poem instead of alcove I immediately thought of nook and won't tell u what I rhymed with that lol have a gr8 day x
LOL
LOL!!!
sad not many frisked ,,,but beautiful imagination
as well as invitation
well done
hope he came
thanks loved he came lol x
thanks loved he came lol x
CONGRATS Ma'am
i knew he must have
this was just a confirmation