sueb
sueb
Dec 11, 2012

Feeling Frisky

I'm feeling frisky
Can we be a bit risky?
find some little alcove
and share our love
I've never been so brave
but you, right now, I crave
Is that a sound of condemnation?
No, cos here you are at my work station
You say "I need you to do some filing"
I outwardly moan but can't stop smiling
never has it felt so right
can't wait for more afternoon delight

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Ireland, IRL

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Comments

Race_9togo

LOL This good, but I think lines 3 & 4 need a re-write. "alcove" is real hard to rhyme!

Nice one.

sueb

Hi Jim
thanks for enjoying this little one but keeping in line with this poem instead of alcove I immediately thought of nook and won't tell u what I rhymed with that lol have a gr8 day x