(following http://new.neopoet.com/node/broadway-lovesick-puppies )
..you and me,
that’s all.
the stage is set-
for the second coming,
as I take center-stage
I am
illuminated,
by the spotlight
irradiated,
by the eyes.
imperceptible
in disguise.
the curtain’s lifting
the fog, settling
the lights, dimming.
the spotlight, shifting
to your face.
I act,
for in this act,
I get to touch your lips
with mine.
conceivably, at a point during this act,
my stunted heart started beating for you.
perhaps, gone unnoticed.
by the deafening roar of the crowd
applauding,
cheering,
enticing,
the phony development
of a pseudo-love
cloaking a true love.
(final part of the three poem set can be found here http://new.neopoet.com/node/denouement )
Comments
keep going,
this is good, you're capturing the moment perfectly in this act of poetry.
Bravo!!
Eddie
thank you for the comments,
thank you for the comments, mate :)