Finally back from where she disappears
during wee hours of each night;
she did return
but, has to learn
she doesn't treat me, right.
Cloaked in night's midnight shadows,
night's beauty rare calls to me;
she may be here
but, that is my fear!
She may never let me be.
Adding up just how I feel for her
this goddess of twilight time;
her actions do tell
of my personal hell,
what she's doing to me is a crime!
I was happy when she was around me
then, night's canopy would beckon her, out;
"Be back in a while"
she says with a smile,
then, I'm left all alone to just, pout!
My patience are my only allies,
however, they're wearing quite, thin.
The way that she flirts
repeatedly hurts,
I must've committed some sin!
I never had great expectations,
and I know that my feelings are real;
I never assume
there's not enough room!
I need closure to end how I feel.
Before things get any more clouded
dissmissing each, and every care,
my hands are clean
you know what I mean?
This relatioship isn't quite fair!
When alone, I will finally find, solace
in the fact that, it didn't last long;
she just wouldn't "play",
so suffice it, to say
she left words, but she left me no.....song.
Comments
The rhyme...
and rhythm was great! I liked this one, because I could relate to it. I suppose that there are many who can, but I remembered a girl in particular! Good work, ~ Gee
10 - Q, sir Gee....
...I may just show up in a darkside chat, soon.
docmaverick.
Loved,
Loved this full of bad memories, dealt with in humour. And as Gee has stated, good rhythm and Rhyme. Regards Roscoe.
thanx....
...greatly appreciated.
doc.