a cool breeze sets the tone
leaves twist and turn
rustling like cabassas
in a restless rhumba band
the pace quickens
a whistling glissando
rises higher and higher
then, in unison
leaves roll over
backsides to the moon
somber harmonics emerge
a mad tympanist
antagonizes the sky
into self-announcing
drum rolls of rain
this movement ends abruptly
leaves return to the opening theme
a graceful shimmy
flicking pizzacato raindrops
back to the sky
Comments
This is one of the best poems
This is one of the best poems I have read @ Neopoet. Period.
Thank you.
~A
Dear Anna
the texting of your comment has no typos, or misspelling ,and does not ramble...so I am assuming you are not drunk, stoned, or impaired in any other way...so I'm guessing you are just in a very generous mood.
I don't know what else to say,except, thank you.
sincerely
You are out of your mind to
You are out of your mind to think I meant it.
Jus' kidding. Wanted to make sure you weren't drunk stoned or impaired in any way....
~A
Did I happen to tell you I love this poem?
I get lucky once in a while..
I get lucky once in a while...sometimes even when I am writing a poem!
thank you for your generous words of encouragement....don't forget to be just as generous to yourself!