brittle light
brittle light
May 29, 2011

Symphony Of A Squall

a cool breeze sets the tone
leaves twist and turn
rustling like cabassas
in a restless rhumba band

the pace quickens

a whistling glissando
rises higher and higher
then, in unison
leaves roll over
backsides to the moon

somber harmonics emerge
a mad tympanist
antagonizes the sky
into self-announcing
drum rolls of rain

this movement ends abruptly

leaves return to the opening theme

a graceful shimmy
flicking pizzacato raindrops
back to the sky

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Comments

brittle light

the texting of your comment has no typos, or misspelling ,and does not ramble...so I am assuming you are not drunk, stoned, or impaired in any other way...so I'm guessing you are just in a very generous mood.

I don't know what else to say,except, thank you.

sincerely

K

You are out of your mind to think I meant it.

Jus' kidding. Wanted to make sure you weren't drunk stoned or impaired in any way....

~A

Did I happen to tell you I love this poem?