Jackweb
Jackweb
Dec 06, 2022

SILENCE THREAT

a sophisticated silence
scuttled away my peace
pierced my giant hope
I am now a living danger
planted in the sands of time

©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

About This Poem

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About the Author

Region, Country: Imo State - Republic of Biafra(Nigeria), NGA

Favorite Poets: Late Christopher Okigbo

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Comments

Lavender

Hi, Jackweb,
I find this to be very stirring. One of your best!
Peace to you,
L

Geezer

that your life isn't in danger because of your political views. Nice work, it makes one reflect on our world and the dangers of speaking out in some countries. Stay safe. ~ Geez.
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