Geremia
Geremia
Aug 29, 2015

HIDE

HIDE

Emeralds, rubies, and diamonds
black veils of sweet perfume
eyes blinded by sun's reflection
on waters blue
all things shiny and new
monsters and demons smiling
through the masks of imagination
bright jewels of sublimation

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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wesley snow

have I? Scribbler barked about us not reading and critiquing as much as we should and I am the worst offender. I get so wrapped up with the workshop program I forget the purpose of the site.
To communicate.
Your writing is always rather esoteric, but usually I follow gently along. This one kind of went over my head. The imagery of stones to water was lovely, but I missed the poem.
Remember though, when a poem is being read it is not the poet being judged, but the reader.

lovedly

a surf of difference
from death demons
to life and diamonds
well done
the Lord's kindness
as you approach
your life's
ordained assignment