aroused at her core
molten pressure triggered
optimal pressure increases
steam escape velocity extreme
plate structure agitation
fissure motion
set to…-_
– - shift jarrr!!!!!
roll-symphonic jack hammers
jolt- /sway… not-rock-ab’a
rock a-city– -seismic s- — - hu - d
d-e - – er - -
Calm to discombobulate’/disor’der
re secure civil structure…
until she shakes again
Comments
Wow David !! big smile
Phew, that was a quickie ! but it worked lol, I have to say it was a little too soon to finish I think it could have been drawn out a little more but that's just me being greedy again I suspect, Sorry but I have to run I have a plane to meet in a few hours and I need to get sorted to drive and pick them up, I will say very well done hun I did enjoy the read short though it was lol giggle
love Jayne x
I'm sorry,
but I had a little trouble seeing the poem in the odd language. It may just be me.
I often say that when a poem is being read it is not the poet who is being judged, but rather the reader.