Felt

The sound of silence
can fill a room
the atmosphere
clouded in gloom
anger permeates the air
not said, but its there

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ireland, IRL

Comments

This is the best poem of yours I have read.

No mushy stuff, no wasted words.

It's not entirely original, but what is in 12000 years of human literature?

Go for the sparsity and economy of words.

Bloody welll done.

To be honest, when I read your first works they kind of tingled but seemed soppy. I think you are growing as a poet.

thanks a mil Jess appreciated

thanks a mil Jess appreciated glad u liked this little one have a merry christmas and a merrier new year all the best
Sue

I'll go out on a limb and make a suggestion on a free verse poem (which I'm not that good at). That last line... maybe unstated or unsaid instead of not said. Just an idea from an old rhymer lol. But I Do like the brevity in getting the point across.................stan

Felt

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This is the best poem of yours I have read.

thanks a mil Jess appreciated

Hi Sue

thanks so much Stan glad u

thanks so much Mark so glad u

A humdinger short and sweet.

thanks glad u enjoyed this

Sueb

thanks Ian T glad u enjoyed