Unrequited love
Something to do
my unrequited love
the desire to unite once again,
to fill an empty space
love falls down a flowery lane
hope you will pick up the lost strains
of petals strewn
and come again
my Valentine
will you
Jan 21, 2014
Unrequited love
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Loved
We all carry a flag for someone outside of our day to day existence, it is the norm, but as this says we can take a sneaky dig at it on Feb 14 if only to step outside of our normal ways.
Good write though could do with a tidy ups, Yours Ian.T
long time
no one read this
will tidy up as u suggest
thanks Ian