IMMORTALITY
Waters icy cold
pure and new
bubbling white and blue
melting mountain snow
into rivers flow
to live again its Spring.
like a soul waking from
Winter's sleep....
Jan 11, 2014
Immortality updated
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Joe
A lovely piece yet I think that it needed a few more words where the waters reach out to the sea and then up into the clouds to be reborn as that Ice and snow.
Hope this finds you in charge of all those things that trouble you so.
Know that we walk with you always, Yours Ian.T
Thanks, Ian. I wanted this
Thanks, Ian. I wanted this to be short and quick as a mimesis of the event itself.
joe
Joe
It is complete as you have said.
You go well and take care,
Yours Ian.T