I set out to sea to see what I could see
I came upon a rock that was being mocked
I saw these scenes before my eyes I cried
I was a wayfaring stranger in a land within; danger stranger
A land not meant to be, a land I wished I have had never seen
The sights of terror, the sights of dread, and the home of the living dead
I set out to sea once again a stranger man than Din I thought; a water barer
I ought to be forgiven and then I realized that it was I whom was naught
The sun beat upon my brow and I sat and wonder how I was taught the lies
Of Space and Time I know not much but Life and indifference I am a Master
A Captain of a rotten ship that lists to one side or the other; disaster portrayed
Success is only seen as stars upon the Horizon; the boiling Sea sees me not sun dried
Tied to the Mast as if the winds did blow cutting skin and garments so; such is failure
I tailored my own boots and I walked in them deeply with rusted sword at my side
I set out to sea to see what I could see only to find out I was blind to every lie
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
Comments
hi Sinbad
The alliteration and assonance were a lot of fun and nearly toungled my tang lol. A few thoughts:
stanza 2 line 2 "..I have had never seen" I Think I know the reason for this but I also think it is too disruptive to the narrative
stanza 3 line 1 I think barer is a typo but maybe you Don'y mean to say bearer
But all in all still fun to read...............stan