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Nov 20, 2013

Ian and Loved..Duo poets

Ian and Loved.. By.......Duo poets

Better to walk the beach alone,
you too
Better to walk the beach alone,

Friends will gather,
as they call
your name
one by one.

Ian
and
Loved

Loved
and
Ian

Life can be so
very lonely
even when...
in a crowded room

Better to walk the beach alone,
never moan
one day the world
will you, alone own...

The small bard was
also ours!!!!!!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 5 months ago

Just a play on some of my old words,
bringing them up to todays use,
as a new poem or answer to your writes.
Alone in a room full
Walking alone on the beach etc:
No matter where you are or what you do
there is only You.
This is where personal responsibility comes in.
You are responsible for all you ever do,
and the effect it has on others.
Take care young Bard, and clean your footprints up LOL,
They should only be on the lawn not the virgin sand.
Yours Ian.T

Seren

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

I know over time you both have created a great bond of friendship, its nice to read how you feel about him, this could do with a tidy up but then I always say that don't I lol ;)

love JC xxx