I watched a leaf float from a tree,
no breeze to guide its path,
it flew as delicately as a flake of snow,
undetermined where to go,
landing here on branches, there buoyed up,
its ariel shape,
its colour brown and pale,
and with its gentle dance
my thoughts began to meditate
on autumn's quiet expressions,
their subtle grace;
it landed with a little sound,
a full stop as it found its place
among its colleagues on the ground.
Nov 06, 2013
A GLINT OF LIFE
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ann
I hope the meditation carried on to where you wanted to be.
I thought this a lovely journey thought it lasted so short a while.
Have a lovely night and I hope all your tomorrows will be filled.
Yours Ian.T
Beatiful Journey,
Beatiful journey reading your poem and picturing the leaf as it fell. Love Roscoe...
Lovely imagery! So peaceful
Lovely imagery! So peaceful - this truly captures the beauty of autumn.
Thanks for sharing
Love Mand xxxxx
Ann
What a beautiful moment captured for all time in words, you bring a sense of peace and wonderment I really enjoyed this piece. there is nothing more to say but thank you for sharing such a private beauty
love always JC xxx
thjs is
really wonderful. I like its simplicity more than anything else.
A piece I really wished I have written dear Anna.
Thank you dear friends, it
Thank you dear friends, it was a special moment,
and I wanted it to be just that.
Love Ann