And who is God
When I was young ...
I asked my teacher ...ma'am why does the Earth have human beings...
and why there are no more Earths elsewhere ....
there must be
she said
No there is only one Earth and God made it
I asked who is God.
she put a finger on her lips....shh shh shh
today I read some news
NASA says 4.2 billion Earths elsewhere....
I think
God must be a factory man
Comments
Loved
Same answer:-
Answer
Naturally!! lol
Number 42
Comments need a lot of work to become poems young bard, are you being lazy.?????
Yours Ian.T
We might need those other
We might need those other Earths the way we humans are destroying this one! :)
Interesting and thought provoking. ( something I've come to expect from your poetry ).
Love Mand xxxxx
Loved
I have to agree with Ian this is a little messy and its not pleasing to the eye but saying that the content is there again you just have to craft it and hone it till it shines like a new penny
see what you can do eh ? ;)
love JC xxx
I will do ...what happened
to the other one
you promised to polish
you may have to remind me I
you may have to remind me I have been gone for a while ? ;)
JC xxx
a reminder
as desired This is the second one thanks again
Hi loved
I liked this poem up until "A great manufacturer too".
I felt the factory man was a stronger, more powerful ending. God being removed from the lofty position religion has put him to that of a common factory worker is a really powerful image.
Nice poem though :D
Eyes behold
they scold
and
a poet is sold
amended
till god is powerful