ANTI-RANDOLOGY by Ron Woodruff
For the LUCK-/y do SMILE/ for the NEED-/y please TRY/ when in MOURN-/ing do CRY.
We are BE-/ ings of Flesh/ we are TRAPPED/ in this MESH/ love don't QUEST-/ion MORE.
Is it HARD-/er to SEE/ the small DIFF'-/rences plea:/ we are KIN/ 'til we DIE.
for the CHILD-/ ren we HOPE/ on the GLOB-/al scope WE/ must spread LOVE'S/ blessed SPORE.
Ron
Comments
A hit.
A palpable hit.
You have been a most excellent participant in this workshop.
Thank you sir, I had hoped it would all come back to me.
Thanks for the very kind words. Thanks to Rula and you for acting as a well oiled machine.
Ron
Hi Wesley! Hi Rula!
Am I to suppose that the revisions I made to my Anapestic Hexameter quatrain fixed the problem? I haven't heard anything about the revision or how metrically correct it is after the changes.
Please let me know,
Thanks,
Ron Woodruff (BlueDemon77)
No revisions were needed.
You hit it on the head. Start working on a final poem. Dactyl/Trochee or Anapest/Iamb. Three quatrains any length.