wesley snow
wesley snow
Sep 25, 2013
This poem is part of the workshop:

The Bottom Line

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Anapest Example (Bottom Line Workshop)

Since everyone is moving onto Anapest here is my example. Remember we strive for strict form for the purpose of the workshop. Seldom will you write a poem entirely Anapestic. Help yourself by using polysyllabic words (words of many syllables). They, more than single or double syllable words, tend to mold to a meter surrounding them.

 

In a poem unaware lurks a line Anapestically true.

It is not very often that poems of this type are complete.

So then try as we might we are likely to fail at this form.

Therefore, blending is called for in poems of this nature and style.

 

 

In a poem / una-ware / lurks a line / Ana-pest- / ically true.

It is not / very o- / ften that poems / of this type / are com-plete.

So then try / as we might / we are like- / ly to fail / at this form.

Therefore, blen- / ding is called / for in poems / of this na- / ture and style.

 

 

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Southern California, USA

Favorite Poets: Tolkien

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Rula

Rula

11 years 7 months ago

and it drove my crazy.
I thought the word "poem" is two syllabic word. :)