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Sep 24, 2013

If only, Shakespeare could hear

to err, tis human..
.how doth thou sayest
thou in absence
and
Thy, where dostith cometh from
another poeter’s version
Thou sleeepest
like in tempest...

As I return from a worldly sojourn
was absent for a week
none notestist dis
not even thou
none will misseth us at all
that I doth vow!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

William Saint George

If this is supposed to be nonesense verse, then you're spot on.

I find humour in the ridiculous conjugations, but it makes almost no sense to me.

Also, the first line is from Pope, I believe.

mand

mand

11 years 7 months ago

What clamourr do we rise in the greater scheme of things and of what worth are we? just a drop in the oceanic sea is the plight of thee and me.

Love Mandxxx

weirdelf

maybe my sense of humour is deeply flawed.

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 7 months ago

It is terrible that this whatever is going to have more comments than many poems that need them on Neo.
Told you the world is Mad, when this that sounds as if someone fixed your drink has so many writing about it.
Tell the truth was this supposed to be seriously funny or were you having a day where you thought we hadn't noticed, lol.
Take care young Bard and put more water with it.
Yours Ian.T

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foundation of this one
emanated from one u had sprung
just go and see
and salvage
the ung bard
will ye
happiest be thee