The Rain Sprite
The Rain Sprite
Jun 19, 2013

Forlorn Hope

In silence
I confide,
To a friend
I dare not,
I bit my lip
To stop myself
from opening
The door shut closed.
No...not before a strange
Or a confidante even,
No one must know!
I clung to one thing,
A coin of no value
To be exchanged
For a piece of bread
To satisfy this hunger
And silence the voices
Shouting back.
I dare not beg.
I am poor
But a beggar
I refuse!
For hunger,
A bread.
For thirst,
My tears.
For solitude,
The silence.
For hope,
But there's only despair.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: been having a hard time writing poems these days...talk about being caught in such a chaotic world of endless unfinished tasks.. I miss writing poems so much but I barely have the time T_T

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: I am inspired by poets who can depict the deeper depths of human emotions and soul. Simplicity captivates me as well. I have a special place in my heart for Oriental poems.

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 10 months ago

A loss and refusal to give in, with an acceptance of reality all thrown in to a well written piece with no words wasted, well done.
Just sit and write for a while as if you were sleeping, then after have a look and sort what you have written.
Like auto writing I do this a lot and then edit for stream, you will soon get back to thoughtful writing, it is there but hidden, Yours Ian.T

The Rain Sprite

Hi there, Ian! Sorry for taking me so long to say my this. I often do auto writing even at work and just can't help. i miss poetry so much and glad to have some time to visit this site and share some stuffs I wrote.
Thanks so much!

Yours,
Gardenia