composed on the run in chat Beau's "Off the cuff" chat
I need a longer extension
and it's not just anal retention
if the connection is broken
there's no adequate token
for means of seeking redemption
Jun 20, 2013
A limerick straight from my mind
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
This is so neat, clear cut,
This is so neat, clear cut, precise,
and it swings into the mind,
then swings out, just so.
Ann.
ta
Ann
Jess
Not Too keen on the Extension you had in your Limerick.
So I thought about it very quick.
Bad job saying Anal all I could think was what a pirk.
I know that typo's are very bad,
But your message seemed rather sad.
Now I have rewritten it I am feeling so Glad, La La
I put in for an extension
With all good intentions
They gave me some flex
To enhance my prospects
On which I made a mess
An extension was my intention
To wander my home on the phone
It didn't work,I felt such a jerk
I made it too short. UC
Yours Ian.T