Rembranches reaching through
Heavenly hollows in the clouds
Tranquilly shaping unguided thoughts
of gardens in vasettes
deeply set in delerium
Jun 13, 2013
Ethereal Intwination
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Shamoneness
Though your words are from another place or time, they had the ability to paint a picture of a trance like floating bordering on the feverish..
Well I just can't find a meaning for several of your big words maybe they are local to where you live,
Yours Ian.T
Thank
you! Ha, i wouldn't say they're local to where I live. I just like using big words.
& sometimes I make words up; like "Rembranches", for example.
Amber